Friday, February 6, 2009

Nude Woman on her Back with Legs Apart


after Auguste Rodin


I am a woman's mouth, painted shut.


There is movement in the corner,

your muttered words full

of the weight of night.


This has nothing to do with me.


A person, oddly, remembers

hay motes in sunlight , her little sister’s

eyes like a chemical burn,


drab non sequiturs of purity.


I won’t say I, but a woman,

any woman, can feel you looking,

instinctively knows the stroke


of the brush that halves her.

2 comments:

Charmi said...

The painting thing (eki-something) seems to be working well for you. Keep going and let's workshop a pile of these!

Rachel said...

Thanks, Charmi...it's especially fun because I'm getting exposure to a lot more paintings and other types of art.