Thursday, January 29, 2009

Life Story


after Nadia Beltei


It is written

all over you, the memory

of pride, the perfect

sapling straightness

of your youth.


The later desperate bend

into the wind.


And didn't you weep yourself

free of leaves?


Too late, you realize

it could have been avoided,

this slow, painful shaping

toward the light,


if you had only

taught yourself

to bow.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hooray!! I can make internal sense of this one!! Thanks for a really good poem, sis. And by the way - - enjoy all the snow while your mother and I head for the Gulf and palm trees, sea food, walks in the sand, etc etc. See ya in a week or so.

Rachel said...

Aren't you funny. I'm glad you like the poem. Have fun on your trip.

greg rappleye said...

You continue to write wonderful poems.

Brava!

Rachel said...

Thanks so much, Greg! I am learning to appreciate this way of sparking writing with other people's visions/art...something I know you understand with your latest project.

I'm glad you like it. :)

Nadia Beltei said...

love it!

Rachel said...

Wow, thanks Nadia! It's such an honor to have you comment on my poem. Your paintings are inspiring!

Nadia Beltei said...

Hi Rachel, please email me at nadia@beltei.com