after Nadia Beltei
It is written
all over you, the memory
of pride, the perfect
sapling straightness
of your youth.
The later desperate bend
into the wind.
And didn't you weep yourself
free of leaves?
Too late, you realize
it could have been avoided,
this slow, painful shaping
toward the light,
if you had only
taught yourself
to bow.

7 comments:
Hooray!! I can make internal sense of this one!! Thanks for a really good poem, sis. And by the way - - enjoy all the snow while your mother and I head for the Gulf and palm trees, sea food, walks in the sand, etc etc. See ya in a week or so.
Aren't you funny. I'm glad you like the poem. Have fun on your trip.
You continue to write wonderful poems.
Brava!
Thanks so much, Greg! I am learning to appreciate this way of sparking writing with other people's visions/art...something I know you understand with your latest project.
I'm glad you like it. :)
love it!
Wow, thanks Nadia! It's such an honor to have you comment on my poem. Your paintings are inspiring!
Hi Rachel, please email me at nadia@beltei.com
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